I think you need to begin with an exterior shot of the museum building itself - a building with the word 'Museum' written on it ; the camera tracks towards it slowly; then there's a dissolve perhaps to a shot of a door with the words 'Archive & Restoration Room' - and then we get into your script. Remember, your audience needs to be told everything which you know about your story - and sometimes, when we know out story very well, we forget the audience does not.
I think you need to begin with an exterior shot of the museum building itself - a building with the word 'Museum' written on it ; the camera tracks towards it slowly; then there's a dissolve perhaps to a shot of a door with the words 'Archive & Restoration Room' - and then we get into your script. Remember, your audience needs to be told everything which you know about your story - and sometimes, when we know out story very well, we forget the audience does not.
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